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Nick Winney's avatar

this has a wonderful rhythm and a subtle rhyme, delicate as the snow itself. you barely feel it as it falls upon your inner ears as your mind speaks it and your eyes manage the crisp punctuation.

Mark Rico's avatar

I really love what you did with this one - "how will you mark where time goes / When all around it tumbles from the sky?"

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