Winter roads
poem
Pleasant as the winter half-light is
We are for home, the two of us
And as the others’ voices fade
Into the dark, we turn, and see our tracks filled in,
Erased by white indifferent snow.
The ground beneath us lies
In ice and silence all the winter long;
Yet we tread it roughly, to wake, alarm;
So easy is it to lose the paling road.
Somewhere a bell, echoless, tolls nine;
Yet here and home lie miles apart, and so
An embarrassment of minutes sprawls between
(Which never knew a clock, nor ever will)
And we are free to think of oddities:
Perhaps there lies another, stranger world
Behind the pink and greying earth
Against the falling snow.
Tell me: how will you mark where time goes
When all around it tumbles from the sky?




this has a wonderful rhythm and a subtle rhyme, delicate as the snow itself. you barely feel it as it falls upon your inner ears as your mind speaks it and your eyes manage the crisp punctuation.
I really love what you did with this one - "how will you mark where time goes / When all around it tumbles from the sky?"