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Rick Barooah's avatar

then...

the girl woke on the next

swallowed the new

and made her go

before the show

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okay, that was probably terrible. Your poem's great, keep up the good work, and best of luck.

Daniel Bishop's avatar

Really enjoyed this, Iris. Nicely done

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