poem
then...
the girl woke on the next
swallowed the new
and made her go
before the show
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okay, that was probably terrible. Your poem's great, keep up the good work, and best of luck.
Really enjoyed this, Iris. Nicely done
Thanks!
Wow. This is as surreal and dark as the Gary Numan's album "Savage (Songs from a Broken World)"--and I mean that as compliment.
I'll have to give that a listen.
Really great; your free-verse is marvelous...and I'm normally not a big fan of free verse!
That's quite the compliment - thank you so much! I'm glad you enjoy it.
then...
the girl woke on the next
swallowed the new
and made her go
before the show
----
okay, that was probably terrible. Your poem's great, keep up the good work, and best of luck.
Really enjoyed this, Iris. Nicely done
Thanks!
Wow. This is as surreal and dark as the Gary Numan's album "Savage (Songs from a Broken World)"--and I mean that as compliment.
I'll have to give that a listen.
Really great; your free-verse is marvelous...and I'm normally not a big fan of free verse!
That's quite the compliment - thank you so much! I'm glad you enjoy it.