poem
Haunting. Sometimes they just won't leave
Wow this is beautiful and so spooky. So many good lines, I love it🖤
Thank you!
Oooh. There’s like a whole spooky story in this one. Are you tempted to write more?
Hmm, maybe! It would make quite a good short story.
Shudder. Well done.
Lovely villanelle with such evocative images; I enjoy its rhythm. Perfect for the October dark.
For sure, it felt like the right poem to start the month with. I'm happy you enjoyed it!
Love this!🥰 Awesome villanelle for the spooky season!
Thanks, I'm glad you enjoyed it! I had a lot of fun writing this one.
Villanelles are so fun; if you get a good refrain they almost write themselves!
I like sifting this through my brain fingers. Beautiful work.
Thanks Jon! Glad you enjoyed it.
So many haunting lines here, like "aped the voice of vanished seas"
Haunting. Sometimes they just won't leave
Wow this is beautiful and so spooky. So many good lines, I love it🖤
Thank you!
Oooh. There’s like a whole spooky story in this one. Are you tempted to write more?
Hmm, maybe! It would make quite a good short story.
Shudder. Well done.
Thank you!
Lovely villanelle with such evocative images; I enjoy its rhythm. Perfect for the October dark.
For sure, it felt like the right poem to start the month with. I'm happy you enjoyed it!
Love this!🥰 Awesome villanelle for the spooky season!
Thanks, I'm glad you enjoyed it! I had a lot of fun writing this one.
Villanelles are so fun; if you get a good refrain they almost write themselves!
I like sifting this through my brain fingers. Beautiful work.
Thanks Jon! Glad you enjoyed it.
So many haunting lines here, like "aped the voice of vanished seas"
Thank you!